RP4

Through my paper, I did touch a little on the academic area, but I would like to broaden my paper to everyone now. It will allow me to advance my argument even more. I think to reach a larger audience, I could use sites like youtube and any other social networking site.

I will have to change my argument slightly to be able to use the visual and audible aids, but I feel like it will be fairly easy to do. The main focus of my argument will surround the first amendment, so I would like to find ways in which I can incorporate that into the entire argument. Hopefully my speech will be able to blend everything together. It my hope to not sound choppy.

I think the fact that I cannot site many of my sources, it will make it more difficult to show that I am actually using factual information and not my own opinion, but depending on how I am able to present it, I may be able to use some sources.

As far as making my argument better through audio, I feel that I will be able to do that with my voice. It is always good when the author of a book reads it because then you get the exact intent of how they thought about it. When I read the basis of my paper, it will come off exactly how I felt when I wrote it. This will allow listeners to become more engaged and understand exactly what I was going for. So, through voice and rhetoric, I will be able to keep my listener involved.